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A Raises the Bar Pass — $125
Best for: writers preparing for serious revision
Targeted development notes focused on execution, escalation, and emotional payoff.
Includes:
everything in Snapshot + Structure Map
midpoint, all is lost, and finale analysis
escalation of stakes and conflict
scene-level improvement strategies
emotional and thematic strengthening
A fast, professional screenplay assessment designed to identify core strengths, structural issues, and immediate opportunities for improvement.
This coverage provides clear, actionable feedback using the Origin Works Story Forge system (Save the Cat + Hero’s Journey hybrid).
Ideal for writers seeking a diagnostic before deeper development work.
A Raises the Bar Pass — $125
Best for: writers preparing for serious revision
Targeted development notes focused on execution, escalation, and emotional payoff.
Includes:
everything in Snapshot + Structure Map
midpoint, all is lost, and finale analysis
escalation of stakes and conflict
scene-level improvement strategies
emotional and thematic strengthening
A fast, professional screenplay assessment designed to identify core strengths, structural issues, and immediate opportunities for improvement.
This coverage provides clear, actionable feedback using the Origin Works Story Forge system (Save the Cat + Hero’s Journey hybrid).
Ideal for writers seeking a diagnostic before deeper development work.